Maybe this is my small-town, grew up bargain-hunting background talking, but does anyone out there--anyone--sort things by price "high to low" when they're online shopping?
If you don't feel that you are possibly on the edge of humiliating yourself, of losing control of the whole thing, then possibly what you are doing isn't very vital. If you don't feel like you are writing somewhat over your head, why do it? If you don't have some doubt of your authority to tell this story, then you are not trying to tell enough. --John Irving